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'crackerjack' = 'cracker' = A word inspired by the "crack" sound made by the whip of a slave driver used to denote a white person or group of white people that are punishing peoples of color for bias rules or laws that they themselves created as means to oppress. 

His name was Brown, his face was black he walked alone outside a shack. A siren sang across the track and signaled clear the next attack. A man in blue (a maniac?) took aim and made the morning crack . Like stones around a cul-de-sac, six bullet holes frame Michael's plaque.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/9/2023 7:21:00 PM
At that time I lived blocks from there. went to the store he last visited. And was shocked with the neighborhood reaction. protested in Florisant. I was there!!!2014 9 years ago? seems like much longer. but it was the height and Floyd came next. Defund the police started back then.
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 9/11/2023 1:42:00 PM
Wow! To be so close to the scene of the horror!! Yes a long time, yet so little has changed (for the better anyway)!!!
Date: 11/22/2014 11:20:00 AM
well written to the point this will touch people give more...
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 9/11/2023 1:39:00 PM
Thanks! Much appreciated!!!
Date: 8/16/2014 9:18:00 AM
Wow Terry ! The poet of the month ! Gud to read u here at soup , an awesome write !
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 9/24/2014 3:13:00 AM
Thank you... glad you liked!!!

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