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9/9/2024 for Bite Size No90 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

The best laid plans once were made by mice and men, I'm afraid. "Oh my God, what have we done?" asked the somewhat larger one. "Human is as human does", said the little ball of fuzz.

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Date: 9/22/2024 11:52:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours, so wisdom-filled. God bless you.
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David Crandall
Date: 9/23/2024 11:17:00 AM
Thanks - I appreciate your kind words Beata
Date: 9/10/2024 9:00:00 AM
Hello David, I really enjoyed reading your poem this morning and thought how insightful and a blend of humor. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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David Crandall
Date: 9/10/2024 8:26:00 PM
Thanks, I appreciate your comments Daniel and glad you liked it! Sometimes, I can't help but show my bias for the non-human animal - lol!
Date: 9/9/2024 4:45:00 PM
Very cute. I always enjoy your humor.
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David Crandall
Date: 9/9/2024 8:19:00 PM
haha - thanks Hilda

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