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Metallic and ancient it slept

Found the abandoned misused tomb Metallic and ancient it slept Airstream trailer, silver bullet I wandered the forest and wept Found a rusted knife in the ash Metallic and ancient it slept A kitchen tool, left in the rain It was just begging to be kept Found a can of neon spray paint Metallic and ancient it slept I helped my siblings paint our barn And at time’s end, away we crept

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Date: 1/29/2025 11:06:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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