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You touch me. You stare at me. You think I'm your private property. I'm supposed to like that? In childhood, you teased me. You told me I was weak. That no boy will ever like me if I stay a geek. And I'm supposed to take that? Your opinions oblique. Me caring; at its peak Me silenced; I still speak You're in the shadows, where you creep.

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Date: 9/19/2024 11:16:00 AM
Hope u are good, sorry about my first thought, hav a great day
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Date: 9/19/2024 6:08:00 AM
Thank you!
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Date: 9/19/2024 5:15:00 AM
Men are beautiful Write about our brighter side next time
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Victor Ukoyen
Date: 9/19/2024 10:02:00 AM
Miss Jane Doe Men please note Men are beautiful Write our brighter sides Sides of the story you know Know everyman is not like John Doe Doe and Roe cannot be the same Same to you men Men love your women Women are beautiful Write about their brighter sides Sides of the story you know Know every woman is not like Jane Doe
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Yii cw
Date: 9/19/2024 6:04:00 AM
If it’s my point of view it doesn’t mean I’m generalizing all men. Notice there’s a question mark, it’s about some. Write about that yourself maybe.
Date: 9/19/2024 12:40:00 AM
I have a few poems on this subject :) thank you for sharing.
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Date: 9/2/2024 6:48:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Yii cw
Date: 9/19/2024 6:05:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/30/2024 12:43:00 PM
Men!
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Date: 8/30/2024 12:32:00 PM
Awesome, Lady!!!! Find your equal. :-))
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