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Can you envision us lost in a world of ours; paradise built by the Gods just for us two? Would you taste with me a delectable slice of heaven? Picture us astride upon satyrs... exploring a mythical, enchanted land, drifting our way across it like dandelion seeds. Perchance we'd gambol about the verdure with carefree abandon, tasting freedom with salivating tongues as we shout "Olé!" Perchance we'd take flight with the faeries and hum a tune from nightingales, or just lie in delightful tranquility beneath a weeping willow, swept off by a soothing breeze. Or we could just quietly bask in the bright midday sun! Can you imagine passionate kisses under a cascading waterfall with a rainbow hovering right above it? Can you imagine us lying on a swinging hammock gazing at diamonds littered in skies of blackboard? Can you imagine these embarrassment of riches? Let's take this great adventure! Let us discover the true meaning of bliss! Baby, close your eyes and meet me... in Avalon! Can You Imagine - Any Form Poetry Contest(Winner 1st Place) Sponsored by Constance La France Date written: 01/23/2021

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Date: 1/29/2021 1:29:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my Can You Imagine contest with this excellent poem, I loved it and your image too _Constance
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Date: 1/29/2021 5:08:00 AM
Superb write! Congrats on your win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/29/2021 6:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Seeker:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 1/28/2021 1:23:00 AM
A poem so vivid and descriptive. Congrats on your first place win in the contest Edward. God bless. ~ Ani
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Date: 1/23/2021 12:40:00 PM
Hello Edward, you created a beautiful romantic poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/24/2021 11:17:00 AM
Hello Edward, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/23/2021 4:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene:-) Enjoy your day as well!

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