Medical Science

Here I sit again once more
Another doctor visit today,
More lab work and tests
I just want the pain to go away.

One doctor says its this
Another says its something new,
I'm still left without any answers
While over the weeks my pain grew.

Is this all such a mystery
Are things really so complicated,
Tell me when i'll find this out
Will the pains to the results be related.

Many have faith in medicine
Say doctor's were made by man,
Why do they take their precious time
This is something I'll never understand.

I'm finally in an axam room
Told the doctor will come in a bit,
If i wasnt in so much pain right now
I'd walk out and say forget it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007


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Date: 7/25/2009 9:50:00 AM
Congrats Jodie on your poem 'Medical Science" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/24/2009 6:45:00 AM
wonderful write , you are such a creative,talented poet... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here...congrats on your poem being featured this week. great you! adeleke
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Date: 7/24/2009 6:43:00 AM
wonderful write , you are such a creative,talented poet... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here...congrats on your poem being featured this week. great you! adeleke
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:34:00 PM
Congratulations on this well-deserved poetry to be displayed. More power and success. Ernilando
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Date: 7/20/2009 12:30:00 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:53:00 PM
It isn't easy being ill. I'm sure most can relate to the long waiting room waits. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week Jodie>>James
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Jodie, congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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