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Me and My Boy Funom Sonnet

My boy and me. On the bed my pal sat drawing, My boy,one gem,"it's me time" I hug him,"why not art making", Duo get a key job to chime. Big tax kid,go for nap dreaming, Up now, sip tea,eat bun,boy mine, We go for fun,uno shuffling, Far is the zoo,we jog and mime. Oh!the joy of fox,cub, stories, Day is gay,ink in the glories , Pet dog in red cap hurries. Man in his eye,my son Saad, Fan of non veg,dad is Bernard, Mom in the gym,for lad it's hard. Funom Sonnet special rules. 14 lines, all words must contain only three letters or less, except for rhyme words. Lines must have 7 or 8 syllabic count Rhyme Pattern: a-b-a-b-a-b-a-b c-c-c-d -d-d My first attempt..quite time demanding and brainy., quite a few writes and rewrites...had fun. Thank you. Contest: The Funom's Sonnet Sponsor: Funom Makama 16/4/2016

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Date: 4/16/2016 11:56:00 PM
Thanks for your encouragement....best wishes
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Date: 4/16/2016 12:29:00 PM
Wonderful playful and delicate sonnet.Congrat. I enjoyed it .
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