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Poetic Form: Lyric
Inspired: 2024 June 11
Audio: All My Ex's Lives In Texas by Karaoke Fun
 
 
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The Sea of Galilee aint in Texas good lord I truly love just walking that sea nobody else will join us in Texas and that's why I'm heading to Tennessee
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I'd be playin' that pie-an-no in Texarkan-NADA Dry upside-down that panhandle Flori-DUH, I know why Galveston aint New Orleans it's nigh Corpus Christi Highs not about the school's teachings not score floored football guys.
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Be on the loose with Canadian Goose in OttawA-LOHA calls We EarthShake -N- VolcanoBake surfin' Viagra Falls We all know Zen our hospital friend where he says good night as you rest quite awhile Fished and caught an Elk, shot a rainbow--killed a trout, for that's, indeed, CHICAGO style!
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We crack wide open folks were smokin', golden age just sizzlin' Pan-DUH bear rugs, I'll-Ask-'um, should-know, south of Catchy-Can-Can [Translate only] (Alaskans, Juneau...Ketchikan) I'll heed you Vice ... ere Good-buy, bail those lugs,
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Map--my, what will they think of next? All those Ex's down in Texas!
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Date: 6/12/2024 2:10:00 AM
This is brilliant dear hilo, i love the lyrical flow and rhythm of your lyrics. Can hear a melody as i read your words woven in such a creative manner! Made me smile as i read “” all my exes live in texas” that sounds right, and i love “shot a rainbow--killed a trout, for that's, indeed, CHICAGO style!” Soulful write! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always, from my island to your island
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Date: 6/12/2024 2:38:00 AM
Obliging the sponsor methinks appropriates ex's vs non romantic and forced rhymes tossed about "Rainbow Trout Coconut Almondine"--it's to die for! I appreciate your kind expressions and sweet sentiments, Ink Empress, Aloha, William
Date: 6/11/2024 6:59:00 PM
All my exes live in ... well, I haven't kept track. Could be Texas Willy
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Date: 6/11/2024 7:23:00 PM
Woody, Texas is big ... tho' Hilo's city blocks bigger, and all rooms comes with no view, and if you wanna move to the countryside -- just take the stairs and walk up -- Aloha my friends, Willie

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