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Make the Naive Happy

Nice People Are for the world’s Days and Nights Twinkling the hallucinations in both Friends Are for the good And the bad That makes up the hallucinations Best Friends Are the potent vigour That Hallucinates your Every progressive motion Family composes The Easter bunnies Santa’s deer’s Amorous, jovial, and accurate And these hallucinations Dire? Or are they constitutes To plainly make you blissful

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Date: 6/8/2009 10:58:00 AM
Nice Job. Good Use With Words. Lol Peace. Boo
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Date: 6/1/2009 5:15:00 AM
Last verse...Are these...or And are these...and I think "constructs" would be more what you mean? Exploring the relavence of the hallucination is a great topic for verse. Light, Love & Welcome
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:00:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2009 2:12:00 PM
Nice analogy, uncommon and interesting! Thanks a lot for sharing :)
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