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Written on April 14th 2025 for Constance  La France's 11 beautiful line prompt.

underneath the rare glimmer of a pink moon a quietening zephyr caresses silken skin calming the chaos in my heart the noise of modern life feels increasingly distant while freshly budding leaves sway to the rhythm of nature’s pirouette a lone fawn approaches a babbling brook whilst I lay amongst emerald-green moss watching the Milky Way glide by t i m e seems to slow to the flap of a woodcock's wings paradise found in my remote verdant cul-de-sac

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Date: 4/18/2025 2:13:00 PM
I like this fragmented verse with many deep metaphoric layers, actually, Brian loves this as well, I have written too many of them. Congrats on your well-deserved win
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