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Maid My maid of honor, my best friend, (smile) help me in the moment, help me in the hour, help me make it down... the great white tower steps. My legs are wobbly, my heart is throbbing. It is deafening in my ears. My fears are not as I expected, they are greater than, I have ever known... (in awe) in my whole life. (a whisper) "Why", you ask? (chocked words) Because this is so important, I need to get it right/write. (a tear unbidden) The dress must be perfect, (a soft smile) my hair, all finely brushed. (you there telling me it is okay) The silk flowers, well scented (made by you... for this hour) and the space full of perfume. (roses... carnations... simple flowers) He will be waiting for me... (handsome, a cowboy) at the altar. (of the Lord) The guests are all seated, in random chairs across the yard. The arbor, placed in the center for the man of God to speak his words. A place for me to stand, a place for him to stand. My claimed father... to give me away. Then, he and me... we will all, stand and say... the promise of love and togetherness on this Earth and unto the next. A blessing for every thought that we will be as one, and together love God. Sweet rose, my lady in waiting... Kind friend, claimed sister in life, thank you for your strength, your endurance and your tenacity. They give me the edge I need to make it down the stair... dancing all the way, in faith that all tomorrows will be even better than this today, as the dance is just beginning and the orchestra is still just warming up. (softly fades...)

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Date: 4/28/2022 2:06:00 AM
Gorgeous tribute to a woman who must deserve it; takes my breath away!
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Ann Foster
Date: 4/28/2022 7:43:00 AM
She was truly wonderful at everything. I never saw her head dress of flowers until the last moment. It was perfect. I felt like the fairy queen had come to my celebration, and she brought her magic silk flowers and rose perfume. I am blessed to have such a friend. Ty for your kind words. I wish that I could have gathered so many as you ... and brought you to event... Hugs. Ann
Date: 4/26/2022 12:46:00 PM
Wow!! This is WOW!!
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Ann Foster
Date: 4/28/2022 7:41:00 AM
You are so kind. I am glad you enjoyed this read. Have a truly blessed day. Ann
Date: 4/19/2022 12:08:00 AM
You describe in exquisite detail what a wedding day feels within the bride. I live the role of your bridesmaid. I seem to feel ... God is there for each of us. His work gets through fastercwhen humans gavecatbleadtbone good friend, partner, parent, relative ... (Stop me)
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Ann Foster
Date: 4/28/2022 7:41:00 AM
No... I love your words, and would never stop you... Ty for your kindness... God bless your day. Ann

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