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Magnificent Artist

For it was her generous harmony, When played with no previous request, That bestowed a tune destine to be heard by the ears; described in her clever melody. Her veins; like musical strings, That opened a sense of companionship in a rare beat, But always drew the fate of two souls much closer. And there will never be one to claim no satisfaction; For her melodious symphonies entrance any audience at her own will. There will be jealousy in her finest lyrics; Those with a passionate dedication. But something in her favorite composition holds a secret message; One that she trusts only her true love to find. Autumn roses will bloom at her feet when she's in the midst of writing yet another song; One that even the deaf will always hear with abiding pleasure; For her; the magnificent artist.

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Date: 7/7/2014 8:04:00 PM
Zach,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Zach Broniszewski
Date: 7/8/2014 8:43:00 PM
Thank you so much!(: And I'll tell you about myself if I figure out how to inbox you because I do all of this from my cell phone and haven't really looked into it:p Thank you though!:)
Date: 6/27/2014 5:42:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Zach. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Zach Broniszewski
Date: 7/8/2014 8:43:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/27/2014 8:45:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Zach :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Zach Broniszewski
Date: 7/8/2014 8:45:00 PM
Aww thank you so much! I appreciate it so much! Nice meeting you too Ms. Anne Lise :)
Date: 6/27/2014 12:21:00 AM
Hello Zach, Welcome to PS I believe you will have a wonderful experience here as we enjoy all your poetic art and heart, You are now part of a great family that i believe will be a great blessing .. Hope to follow up all your work ..Your new PS friend RRC
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Date: 6/26/2014 2:21:00 PM
Zach,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/26/2014 11:45:00 AM
Deep write... Nice one! Anyhow, WARM WELCOME to Poetrysoup! I have been here 'bout 2 years now and I am enjoying my time here..:) I got lots of learning here..:) and I hope to you will..:) Congratulations and God bless..:)! , olive eloisa GBU
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