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Lucid Sky

Falling Sweetly kissing, she She Living but dead Truly she is A bitter nightmare That I can never kiss But still my Sweet, sweet dreams Of blissful scars A dream filled with me And me And me And the delusions of we Now I’m falling, Falling back to the skies of reality.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2011 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Guy-Adler. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 7/7/2011 9:44:00 PM

There is just something about this piece that kept me reading it over and over. I cannot quite place why I am so enamored with this piece you have so beautifully penned, but I am. Congrats on the feature, it is definitely well deserved. I think this will have to go into my favs. Thank you for this, truly. Madison

Guy-Adler Dorelien
Date: 7/9/2011 1:14:00 PM

I am gratefull that you enjoyed my poem, and thank you for adding it to your fav =). Love Guy-Adler

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/5/2011 6:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Guy-Adler. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/30/2011 6:59:00 PM

Good expressions well worded on Lucid sky with metaphor, Guy