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John Stasukevich

9/6/2022

a cool evening moon glows she peers with sudden intent the stars glisten as the wind blows the clouds flew swiftly as they went her mind strains with blissful wonder the moment so fleeting yet cherished trees bent over as she looked under oh, that moon wistfully vanished smiling she pondered the gift her heart rejoiced as he spoke her soothed mind gave her a lift her love so strong in her awoke ah, romance dwells sweet our spirits are uplifted praising each other we repeat how blessed we are and gifted said he “you’re beautiful and fair” smiling she received his praise his love for her transcended there she hugged him after a gaze their walk continued near the beach the sun reflected on the water a precious moment they did reach as their love welled warm and softer day after day they walked along sharing their hearts’ desire mending wounds in silent song eternal union to inspire

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/22/2023 3:11:00 PM

Hello John Stasukevich, so nice to met you. This poem as i read it seemed romantic Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\

Traci Backstedt

Date: 6/10/2023 10:08:00 PM

You have a true gift John u know how to touch people's hearts and move them to tears .

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/28/2023 9:41:00 AM

Dear John, romantic ink flows from your pen as freely as the waves upon the beach. The intimate aura and imagery of your poem draws me in to eavesdrop on their "lovers' stroll". Such a lovely piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

John Stasukevich
Date: 5/28/2023 4:28:00 PM

I must admit I am really enjoying your comments, Susan. Thank you for taking the time and for such wonderful expressions of your experience reading my poems. It seems the Lord gave me a gift, late in life that I didn't expect. So, I'm using it. I'm so glad to be in this marvelous community of kind and very talented poets! Your are making me feel very welcome. Thanks again. Blessings ~ John

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/27/2023 12:10:00 PM

You set the mood so well with both your romantic words and the shape of your poetry layout. Lovely poetry, John! :)

John Stasukevich

Date: 5/26/2023 4:46:00 PM

Thanks Michelle. I gotta say, everyone is so kind. It really makes me feel welcome. I like your comment "movement of waves on a beach". I will definitely post more. Blessings ~ John

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/26/2023 2:40:00 PM

Hi John, I enjoyed the romantic flow to this, and also the formatting, it reminds me of the movement of waves on a beach, welcome to Poetry soup, hope you post more of your poetry~

John Stasukevich

Date: 5/26/2023 6:28:00 AM

Thanks, Regina. This is my 2nd post. I'm enjoying this wonderful community of talented people. Though we may not have opportunity to be with each other physically, there is a powerful, emotional & spiritual element we can enjoy in each other's writing. That's been my experience. Blessings ~ John

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/26/2023 3:35:00 AM

Beautiful. Love is amazing... God's beauty revealed in us. Welcome to poetry soup. I hope you post a lot of your beautiful words. God bless you. Love, Gina