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July 14, 2023

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Rain, Rain, what an awesome blessing you are! Waiting fervently, finally you're here! All I need an umbrella, To meet my dearest fella, And a pair of solid boots which go far! jillion puddles wouldn’t stop headstrong me, Darling boy I will definitely see, Crazy we are, both love rain! Who cares drizzle, not a pain, Splendifarious rain! reason for glee! Pure Love is blind and foolish, isn't that true? Can’t wait to be with him, for sky of blue! Rain or shine, I must see him, Aren’t we the amazing team? Love, I am truly dying to meet You! FIRST PLACE

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Date: 7/24/2023 8:12:00 PM
This is equally entertaining and delighting ! A beautiful story poem, highlighting the the driving force of love. Congratulations, Mala !
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Date: 7/24/2023 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Malabika, even a chick needs his galoshes. Love the verse.
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Date: 7/24/2023 5:39:00 AM
You have a minutely fine way of writing. This is an example of one such. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/24/2023 6:12:00 AM
Thank you, Chris. Your encouraging comments inspire me to write. Best wishes, always ~ Mala
Date: 7/24/2023 4:12:00 AM
This is a delightful and creative story limerick my dear poet friend. I love and enjoyed it a lot. Congratulations on yur win! Thanks for sharing. Blessings always. Hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/24/2023 4:49:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Len. So delighted to see your beautiful comment! Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 7/24/2023 2:10:00 AM
Oh I love this little poem, congratulations
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/24/2023 4:48:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Terry. Glad you liked this limerick!
Date: 7/14/2023 10:55:00 AM
Hello Mala, a lovely poem. good luck in the contest. Love & Friendship /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2023 5:04:00 AM
Hello Mala, A sickness in the family! I hope it is not serious. We will talk later. Friendship & Love /Darlene\
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2023 4:26:00 PM
I am okay, Darlene. A bit busy with sickness in the family, and also working on a book of translations. Love, Dear Friend..hope you are enjoying summer!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2023 3:54:00 PM
Hello Mala, How are you? I hope all is well with you. You are welcome my friend. Love &Friendship /Darlene\
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2023 1:01:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Appreciate your visit and comment.
Date: 7/14/2023 7:21:00 AM
- Mala, best wishes in the contest with this lovely and cute poem :) - hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! I couldn't but write a limerick with this awesome picture!

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