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Loud and Proud

My husband and I are arguing, and it is loud and proud. We could walk around stomping and mean, under a sad rain cloud, But we have known each other since first grade, with dear Mrs. Stroud. When we disagree we turn into five-year-olds, loud and proud. Others might not understand thinking our marriage is ready for a shroud, These babyish ways work for us, so please forgive us when we are loud. And get out of our way and give us some space when we get proud.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/26/2018 11:15:00 AM
Good one, Caren. Whatever works. LOL
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/26/2018 1:33:00 PM
Hahahahahah Thanks for the stop by, Line.
Date: 7/26/2018 12:23:00 AM
I feel proud when I am loud. I appreciate. Love.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/26/2018 1:33:00 PM
I know, isn't it weird?

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