Lost My Song

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When in this life I felt down You were the one that was around Maybe it was the way you held my hand I knew in my heart you would understand I miss the way we used to sit and talk The times we didn't look at the clock The way you walked in those tight jeans Made me want to pull my skin and scream I remember trembling at your touch I love and loved you so very much I am lost inside now you're gone Baby you are still my life's song When I look to the night sky, I tear I miss you and wish you were here Edward J Ebbs - 05/18/14 Written for a Contest, My Beloved Sweetheart

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Dean Marais

Date: 3/31/2015 7:34:00 PM

I cant even comprehend this kind of pain is like, but I struggle to comprehend the kind of love you've had as well. I can only hope to be blessed with such a love as well, even if it is for a short time

Edward Ebbs
Date: 4/1/2015 7:29:00 AM

Thank You, Dean...

James Horn

Date: 10/4/2014 5:09:00 AM

Would like to see an intro to this poem. Who is it about? We used sit and talk. You need a to between USED and SIT then it will become well-used. Jim Horn

Edward Ebbs
Date: 10/5/2014 12:46:00 PM

Thank You :)

Susan Palli

Date: 5/24/2014 9:13:00 PM

Excellent write! Can feel the sadness.