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Poem Written, June 16, 2023, for the Contest "The Lost Doll"
Sponsored by Charles Messina
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Back then, most girls so loved their dolls; in 'forty-seven- I turned eight. That Christmas, my one wish came true- to play with her, I could not wait. To me, she was so very real- A Magic Skin Doll- 'neath my tree. This newest one topped all the rest; her skin was soft as soft could be. New Latex formed her magic skin; so good she felt within my arms. She was the sweetest doll for me- for sure the one with life-like charms. Where did you go, my baby doll? Years later, when our house was downed- where you forgot and left behind- now with my heartache- in the ground? I pass it often, that long bridge where once our family home stood- recalling memories, so fond. How you were lost- not understood.

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Date: 7/23/2023 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra. This is such a sweet write! :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/30/2023 6:25:00 PM
Thanks, Linda! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/16/2023 7:49:00 PM
Lovely poem, Sandra, congratulations:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/30/2023 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Joanna! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/16/2023 11:02:00 AM
Back with Congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/30/2023 6:24:00 PM
Thank you very much! Sandra
Date: 6/16/2023 7:53:00 AM
Cool last line! Nice memory of your lifelike doll! Happy Friday, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/30/2023 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! It was nostalgic for me to create this poem! Glad you liked it. Hugs, Sandra

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