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Sponsor: Tom Woody 

Contest:   Titanic Farewell 

Darkness falls on the doomed ship’s dazzling frame, Pride and joy of Maiden Voyage destroyed, The wreck descends into a frigid void Sinking souls to their deaths of frothy fame. Like you that’s what I read ‘bout frantic sight, I learned I was the young whom fate would spare, No memories of my parents’ despair - Fortunate star shone on me that chill night. But if Titanic dragged me down as well What would my last words to my loved ones be?! « Let the buried past rest in peace at sea as dead forever mourned - you live to tell».

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Date: 1/16/2024 6:58:00 PM
Awesome parting words margarita. Thx for entering
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Date: 1/7/2024 2:19:00 PM
Good penning Margarita, with nice rhyme and flow too. Hope you had a nice Christmas and every blessing for 2024, Gordon
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