Loneliness

THANK YOU for my LONELINESS that SETS me out to many lanes and PRODS my mind to search on that EXTENDS my being to others and EXPANDS my heart to believe. THANK YOU for this LONELINESS that WOUNDS my heart again and again and FORCES a reckoning of my emptiness that MIRRORS my raw loveliness and DRAWS YOU TO FILL THE VOID when piled on sand my LONELINESS.

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Selash Susu

Date: 1/12/2023 10:45:00 AM

a glimpse of opportunity that loneliness brings. I am drawn to this one

Mich Nayve
Date: 1/14/2023 3:54:00 AM

Hi Selash, Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I am glad to know it resonated with you. Comments like yours have encouraged me to continue writing. Regards, Mich

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/28/2022 3:52:00 PM

Hello Mich Nayve, that is a good way to look at loneliness. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your eveningmy friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/29/2022 4:25:00 PM

Hello Mich Nayve, welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Mich Nayve
Date: 6/29/2022 10:28:00 AM

Hello, Darlene! Thank you for your kind words and for dropping by. It's also a pleasure to meet you here. I'm excited to share more pieces. Have a wonderful day! Mich