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Dearest soup tech Who I love and respect I write to you So that you may know I've tried to be here With iPad and cheer But the login fails me No action tells me Of possible broken links One maybe Just maybe.... My iPad stinks Meanwhile I sigh As I try to not cry As I type again And hope with intent That you might check in ... And tell me How to begin... Xoxo Wish me luck I'm about To push The Button...

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Njabulo Madela

Date: 4/16/2025 9:43:00 AM

Creativity on another level ..this is perfect

Diane Christian

Date: 2/2/2025 4:34:00 AM

nice one

Obiaje Peter Edigah

Date: 12/2/2024 2:55:00 PM

I wish that same luck for myself as I login...

Shelly Gandhi

Date: 11/28/2024 1:37:00 AM

LOVE IT.

Joshua Legister

Date: 11/15/2024 4:06:00 AM

I like the way this flows especially with the analogy.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 10/4/2024 9:08:00 AM

Cute,Izzy.unique

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 9/21/2024 4:14:00 PM

May you have luck on you're login.. We so love Poetry soup that not login in is distressful.. I totalY feel the poem// Almighty Bless

Leroy Baker

Date: 8/1/2024 9:30:00 PM

Let's have cheer........... &hun

Jenny Brewer

Date: 7/16/2024 10:52:00 PM

Ha, love this one.

The Situation

Date: 2/16/2024 5:18:00 AM

All the pass words that you forget so easily. I'm glad they posted this piece, but the soup Is one place I keep secure.

Vilmos Zoltan Galyo

Date: 1/12/2024 5:42:00 AM

Very good!

Michaela Renee Solomon
Date: 1/20/2024 10:34:00 AM

TYVM

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 12/3/2023 11:31:00 PM

Hello ?? This is an interesting poem and good luck in pushing the button.

Michaela Renee Solomon
Date: 1/20/2024 10:35:00 AM

Tyvm

Sabrina Millicent

Date: 10/31/2023 12:38:00 AM

Really enjoyed reading this and love the undertone of the seriousness in the poem.

Susan Mills

Date: 10/9/2023 2:51:00 AM

You definitely will stand the test of time as a poet. Such perserverence and tenacity. It's a cute poem. Good luck!

Deborah Chukwu

Date: 10/6/2023 12:54:00 PM

Its beautiful.

Michaela Renee Solomon
Date: 1/20/2024 10:35:00 AM

Tyvm

Karen Jones

Date: 9/25/2023 1:47:00 AM

Occasionally there are glitches on Poetry Soup. I wrote a comment only to have it not post yet another poets post showed up using my name and theirs! This poem is is funny. I like it.

Michaela Renee Solomon
Date: 1/20/2024 10:36:00 AM

Thanks, I will keep that in mind.

Nelson Olalekan

Date: 9/7/2023 3:57:00 PM

Great,success though

Michaela Renee Solomon
Date: 1/20/2024 10:36:00 AM

Tyvm

Christopher Grieves

Date: 9/1/2023 12:53:00 AM

I wonder how many IT, engineering, techie types have poems or odes written to them..? It is great and an idea I may myself deploy. V. enjoyable (hope you got the desired result Izzy)

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 7/20/2023 12:38:00 PM

Hi Izzy, funny one ??. Thanks for sharing.

Khadijah Augie

Date: 5/24/2023 2:13:00 AM

KH9

Lawrence Ingle

Date: 4/26/2023 6:51:00 AM

Sounds somewhat like me trying to get on poetry soup site here! lol

Fazal Faroqui

Date: 4/16/2023 3:22:00 AM

Happy Birthday Happy Birthday ?? my dear Who says romance is the fiefdom of only the youth? Even today, I drink from your eyes, Your smile causes a ripple in my ?? heart Your love ?? hides the secrets of my soul. In every snowy flake of winter, In the rain ??? drops of Summer I see your face In all my sorrows In all my celebrations You are my life. In the tumultuous waves of life Your the North Star ??, leading me to the shore. You are the Divine candle ??? lighting up my path. The beautiful rose ?? whose fragrance envelopes me I am the drunken dervish whirling around you. - Dr Fazal Faroqui

Karen Dillon

Date: 3/17/2023 6:38:00 AM

Hi, Love it, love the seriousness masked by humour. It made me smile

Izzy Gumbo
Date: 4/5/2023 9:00:00 AM

Thank you, Karen.

Susan Mills

Date: 2/16/2023 11:42:00 AM

Very witty! And unique. Enjoyed!

Izzy Gumbo
Date: 4/5/2023 9:01:00 AM

Thank you, Susan.