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Beguiled by the eyes of a thief Whose hands have stolen the moist of my skin With just a breath my very soul he unruffled With just a gaze he made these words improper; jumbled. Not like any other, he's chaste Not like any other, Not like... Ever he would wipe these tears away Ever he'd kneel to his knees to plead His volition's bullet in my chest Digging trebling holes that never convalesce. Not like any other he mastered This art of hate that tortures as it perforates. Shut the door, I beg So I'll ever see your face It attracts more of distaste, venomous like a snake. Shut the door and don't remind me of your world -Your burning dreams off the wall! Dull me like a flower on the wall. Cause I could die every day My veins would not display Free fall, I already fall I beg, please shut the door. Cause how to let you go? ...Really. I don't know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/23/2016 12:29:00 PM
once again, wonderful first poem. LINDA
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Date: 1/20/2016 9:01:00 AM
what she thought about what I sought is why she fought but also how she got caught in a moment that taught her that Love can only be bought with only a pure heart, otherwise, you will be left distraught....very inspiring luci....;)
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Date: 1/19/2016 4:35:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem, Luci :) - Here you will find heartily warmth, and meet many great poets - A meeting place for inspiration, growth and pleasure for your words and thoughts - I wish you every success - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Luci Lynd
Date: 1/19/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thanks for your warm welcome Anne Lise. Great to hear from you :)
Date: 1/18/2016 8:41:00 PM
Hi Lucy, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Luci Lynd
Date: 1/19/2016 8:05:00 AM
Thank you Linda. I'll surely enjoy writing with you guys. Nice meeting you :)
Date: 1/18/2016 1:37:00 PM
Luci, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT *
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Luci Lynd
Date: 1/18/2016 1:52:00 PM
Thank you Skat, for your warm welcome. Great to hear from you. I love this site and I feel comfortable with people sharing their thoughts right here. Hope to stay for long to write some more. You're awesome :)

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