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Like So Much Dust

Death is an experience life has prepared me for ~ by poet.

As the years accumulate.... like so much dust;
                      time makes its presence known ~
wrinkled skin,   hair loss,  and an assortment of aching bones
         tick off the moments,   days,   months    years
   culminating      in death...
Death is tethered to life;
                  fundamentally... it's the fulfillment of life.
    Birth gives birth  -  to death  ~  they're conjoined,
one cannot exist without the other.
           Tears spontaneously flow at both  -  equally,
death  -  is  -  not  -   the   -   end ~ nor the beginning!
                     A circle has no beginning or end
and neither do souls...
We are souls,  created,  in the image of God
                    eternal     ethereal    sentient...
circles within circles  -  birth,     death,
dreams   -   within dreams  -  within dreams ~
life death  -  death life; 
words ingrained in our thoughts ~  used to justify
               reality,        as we         perceive it to be.
Our view  ~  limited by our conciseness,
           we label death as the end of everything;
                                        including ourselves. 
But is that true?

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Date: 9/11/2024 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Emile with your deeply considered musings! So many amazing images and poignant questionings! Sending you many blessings for each day of your life.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/11/2024 4:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam; I welcome, appreciate, and value your comments, my friend. Emile
Date: 8/8/2024 9:20:00 PM
Enjoyed your soulful musings, Emile. A deep and essential line of inquiry, ‘who am I?’ Warmest congratulations on your fabulous win in Constance’s contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/9/2024 6:49:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/7/2024 9:34:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my contest, I enjoyed your poem a lot, well done, love the quotes too, Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/9/2024 6:49:00 AM
Thanks, Constance; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 7/30/2024 11:07:00 AM
Hello Emile, I like the lines: Tears spontaneously flow for both equally death is not the end. A circle has no beginning pr end and neither does the soul. The last line says it all. A wonderful poem my friend. My frikend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/30/2024 4:10:00 PM
Hello Emile, You are very welcome. my friend. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2024 12:57:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene; as always, it's a pleasure to hear from you, my friend. Emile.
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