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Light Eclipse

The sun hides behind shaded walls when darkness descends and shadows rise. The sky grows dimmer yet still feels so bold as the day fades and night falls. However, a thread of light soon starts to develop and a gleam appears. The battle is over, the sun returns, the night flees, and the day triumphs. Even shadows have a role; they help us learn to deal with light. The cycle repeats itself, the light remains, and the darkness subsides to reveal the day.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/16/2025 10:13:00 AM

Hello Kield Vk. so nice to meet you. I have never seen an eclipse. i hear special glasses are needed it to see the eclipse. you were very lucky to see it. Enjoy your weekend my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/16/2025 11:38:00 AM

Hello Kield vk. thank you for this wonderful comment. yes some day i will experience the sight of an eclipse. Thank you I hope you had a wonderful weekend to. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

kjeld vk
Date: 3/16/2025 10:32:00 AM

Hello, Darlene! It’s so nice to meet you too. Thank you for your lovely comment. This poem is actually from a few years ago, but I’m glad it resonated with you. Eclipses are indeed fascinating phenomena,I hope you get the chance to experience one someday! Wishing you a wonderful weekend as well, my friend. Warm regards, Kjeld

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/11/2025 7:16:00 PM

I like your poem. I can imagine the shadows growing and an eclipse taking place. It lasts such a short time.

kjeld vk
Date: 3/12/2025 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, Hilda, for your lovely comment! Your description of imagining the shadows growing and the brief moment of an eclipse captures the essence of the cycle I wanted to convey. I'm glad you experienced it that way!