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Life's Hourglass

As I hold you in my embrace I wish I could freeze time.. Looking into your angelic face Encourages me to write a Rhyme! I wish the taste of your lips Could forever remain on mine.. The mere softness of your hips Were perfected upon design! Your smile is locked in my memory And your gentle giggle is, too. If I was to ask; him or me? I’d hope you’d choose me to love you! I get lost in your gorgeous dark eyes And I’d rather not be found.. Let me show you paradise, For as my queen you’ll surely be crowned! We.. Locked, intertwined for all eternity Melded together into one organism I wanna swim through this energy And be fed with your eroticism!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/7/2011 12:22:00 AM
I wish I could find a love like that.Well done and keep it up!
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Date: 9/2/2011 6:20:00 PM
Jimmy my friend I've been gone for so long I've missed your work on the soup., you just keep getting better and better! How are you ? By the way I love this passionate write! Laura :)
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Date: 8/31/2011 4:06:00 PM
Amazing poem.. well-written, Jimmy. Love, Annalise
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Date: 8/30/2011 8:08:00 AM
awwwwwww Jimmy I love this poem. Going to put it in my favs. I hope you are back and will write and post more Jimmy. Love, Carol
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Jimmy Anderson
Date: 8/31/2011 3:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Carol..Will try to. JMA
Date: 8/29/2011 4:04:00 PM
lost in your gorgeous dark eyes, and i rather not be found. love this, classic love poetry.a beautiful write
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Jimmy Anderson
Date: 8/31/2011 3:34:00 PM
Thnx. Steve. JMA

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