Life's Great Pond

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Even the smallest creature makes ripples, When it enters Life’s Great Pond, And those ripples just keep on expanding - Far, far, far beyond.

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Daniel Turner

Date: 3/15/2023 6:38:00 AM

That is a fact. Good ripples and bad riplles the ocean knows no difference but everybody in the ocean does. Very clever, Clive:)

Clive Blake
Date: 3/15/2023 9:30:00 AM

I think there are a lot more good ripples than bad ones, thankfully. Your positive comments have certainly sent a good ripple in my direction, so I thank you very much for that Daniel. ~ Clive :)