life of the christ child

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Poetic Form: Sedoka

Inspired: 2024 July 24

Image: The Boy Jesus in the Temple - Seeds of Faith

New Testament 1, Lesson 9: The Boy Jesus in the Temple - Seeds of Faith Podcast

Stanzas: Ichi/Ni-katauta 1st & 2nd 5-7-5, 5-7-5 Sedokada 1st & 2nd 5-7-7, 5-7-7

child of promises among those near or far aged a light of conscience shining glow well stored purpose in truth to others true to his loved ones angels tasked his care Michael and Gabriel there darkness and sin kept away never in danger a Father afar yet near constant everlasting life

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Tom Woody

Date: 7/25/2024 2:41:00 PM

Sweet reverent poem and photo William

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/25/2024 3:06:00 PM

Thanks guys, slight revision since. Aloha William