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Life is a Song

artful alliteration uses air like a baton, breathing begets cadence, creating cushions of cashmere debating the diction, dive into echoes enchanting forever fixated on finishing golden grandiloquence hyperbolic halo's halt my imagination, inciting inclination juxtapositioning joyful jingles kaleidoscopic kick back as lyrical leitmotif lights metaphoric muses narrative nuanced as never before onomatopoeia over and under poetic license prising prose from queued quarters quite hidden rhapsody rising in ringing refrain surreal as singing sensing seduction tone and tempo temptations try upbeat united undulations whilst verses vortex visions as only they can wishes written in wonder of weaving waiting for xylophone zephyrs to signal the end

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Date: 1/13/2024 8:45:00 AM
Dear DD, clever wordplay and diction through and through, made me stop in awe and i love the sound of it, especially the opening lines, i must say, this certainly is a very creative abcedarian. pleasure reading your take, congratulations on your win
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Date: 1/13/2024 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Ink, I intended to be more aligned to a song but this was the poem that appeared so I went with it. Thank you for your placement x
Date: 1/8/2024 2:38:00 AM
Bravo! Superbly done. One doesn't even realise they are reading an Abecedarian. This is a sensational Poem D. Each line perfection, the wraparounds so smooth, and the images are wonderful.
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:51:00 PM
You're so kind in your enthusiasm - we'll see how it does. It was a delightful space to occupy when writing it x
Date: 1/2/2024 9:00:00 PM
Thank you for this commemorative Life poem. The music at the end was superb.
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Date: 1/3/2024 9:35:00 AM
Thank you Hilda, not quite sure I've gone in the right direction for this one but it was fun to write x

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