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Written: November 24, 2023 _____________________________________________ Seraphic sand is sapped on the seashore As swirling waters swallowed the load roar. The roiling river rapidly ground to an oar Shore seaweed—pure praise to restore. A skylark beat the cords, its wings galore Brilliant sky; rapt gasp wails fading before. Moon sashayed stars as it whiffed implore Tides will come and flee—still nevermore. Upon heavens, a moon casts a silvery hoar On the whiffed coo, as the seas' soft afore. Whispered tunefully while purling in abhor I walked around tiptoes, humming a chord. Until the sun rose with a blazing core used their citrin cord to snag the spore.

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Date: 12/13/2023 12:16:00 AM
Your poem is awesome. Congrats on a win.
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Date: 12/12/2023 10:37:00 AM
Beautiful imagery with such lovely word weaving.. it felt good to read it aloud in my mind! Congratulations for your placement among the talented lot in the contest.. loved it!
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Date: 12/12/2023 8:27:00 AM
very good poem Sotto congts on placing hugs Shadow
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Date: 12/12/2023 5:40:00 AM
Really superb poem Las. Easy to read, and flowed perfectly with wonderful rhyme. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 12/5/2023 9:13:00 AM
A wonderful Monorhyme poem Sotto. All the best… Belle
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Date: 11/25/2023 9:56:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Lasaad. Nice imagery. Will be a great winner.
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Date: 11/25/2023 6:19:00 AM
Beautiful monorhyme poem and splendid imagery, my friend. Much enjoyed the tenor of your poem, Lasaad. No doubt a winner. You are on a roll.
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Date: 11/25/2023 5:04:00 AM
Ah what a serene and beautiful scene you’ve captured with words dear sotto, ah rhymes isnt my strongest skill, but seeing you rhyme like its an easy game is so soul warming and beautiful to the eyes and soul. I really love the way you’ve described the sunrise at the end, and also the island ish imagery throughout woven in such eloquence. Is beyond captivating and impeccable especially “ Upon heavens, a moon casts a silvery hoar“ so ethereal. I love those last lines too. And perfect monorhyme FAV
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Date: 11/25/2023 1:52:00 AM
Amazing rhymes Sotto, especially as they all have the vowel 'o' throughout.. An excellent analogy sonnet with imagery from lines in the second and third stanzas... nice couplet to end.. you do rhyme forms so well, especially sonnets..
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Date: 11/24/2023 8:29:00 PM
For the master of rhymes, monorhyme comes easy enough. Your mastery of vocabulary too helps. As Paige has remarked, I wonder how you do this. Great entry for the contest! All the Best dear friend. The beauty you describe of the beach in the evening is simply alluring!
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Date: 11/24/2023 6:54:00 PM
I don't know how you did this. This is above my level, friend. :) I will fav it!
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