Let's Make Love Tonight

I know you have had a long day, hectic and caustic 
You need to rest your bones and lose the stress
What better way than the good old way
A tender sweet session of love and pampering 
In a dimly lighted room with petals of roses sprinkled on the bed and floor
First I will fill the bath with warm scented water 
Then I will take off your clothes gently and lower you into the bath, lather you with soap and clean you like a baby
You will smell fresh and free, so ready to fly
Then I massage your tired muscles with some aromatic relaxing oil till you sigh with release, the tiredness gone 
I will let my fingers linger down below and my tongue do magic up above and together they will bring you to a crescendo of pleasure and stop!
Then I will take my tongue down below and leave my fingers to kneadle up above like I am playing the guitar 
Stroking the right keys 
Until you scream with mad body rippling pleasure 
Only then will I slowly enter your  paradise moving ever so gently, afraid to tear open the flood gate of hidden pleasure
Oh but I lose control, fast, furious then slow and all over again 
I hear you cry, scream, I see the tears but you are also laughing, smiling 
Together we move in close embrace and then we explode, our scent fill the room
That ecstatic and beautiful scent of sweet love making
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 8/5/2019 5:43:00 AM
If you are not writing romance novels you should be because whether or not you know it, you just did, and it did not take 250 pages either. Wow! A shower is waiting for me somewhere.
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Adeshina Aladeshawe
Date: 10/12/2019 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Caren. I just might take your advice and go to work on my first romantic novel...
Date: 8/2/2019 5:17:00 AM
Wow very vivid images! A very pleasurable night I can see, I wonder if there is a lucky lady who has experienced this yet ;)
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Adeshina Aladeshawe
Date: 2/24/2020 5:27:00 AM
Vivid, yeah? I like vivid. Thanks Kudzai!
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