Let's Be Brave 2k11

Many souls linger therein pity's pot. Many minds subcomb thereto th' Addler's. O, shall we permit ourselves hereto rot? So challenges white waters -- the heart of Paddler's.

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 7/30/2011 5:09:00 PM

Interesting expressions and notions, and thought provoking quatrain. Thanks for sharing, Caroline.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/6/2011 2:04:00 AM

Excellent rhythm, rhyme aand imagery. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 7/6/2011 1:41:00 AM

Thanks to all of the poets whom have simply taken the time to read my Quatrain. A fellow poet, - Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/4/2011 10:50:00 AM

I think you are talking about courage here. Puts me in mind of some advice I heard concerning having courage in any situation. Take a lesson from the duck, On the surface look calm and serene and underneath paddle like crazy. Good job here my friend. God Bless, JB

Red Fiery

Date: 6/12/2011 10:31:00 PM

your poems are always creatived . This is equally marvellous .

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/10/2011 5:47:00 AM

Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Anthony. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2011 6:30:00 PM

Anthony~ a real great poem,, nice thing to hold on too..... enjoyed,,p.d.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/9/2011 6:16:00 PM

I think this write is awesome! You said much with few words, but the word choice provoke the thought you want to evoke. I especially like the last line. You are A Writer, and the quatrain is perfect. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.