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Let the Drama In

I, the brook of your wails Sodden my heart Alongside the sheets of fails The fault of what is to start Perhaps the drama Is too much for such Fragile, naive.But mama I'll take a seat and watch You just ought the drama To laze And let father Fade

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/8/2009 10:57:00 AM
Powerful Words. Great Job. Boo
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Date: 5/26/2009 12:07:00 PM
Sajdah, it is good to read your write and know the wonder of your thoughts, good write.
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:04:00 AM
very powerful words, well done
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Date: 5/25/2009 10:50:00 AM
Beautifully written. I was captivated from beginning to end. Truly enjoyed. Thanks for your most welcome comments on my latet poem, very much appreciated. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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