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Left In the Ground

dark cemetaries someones end cast into stone death left in the ground

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/14/2009 1:03:00 PM

thank goodness they aren't there, nice haiku, and thanks, Jade Exit, for comments, jmg

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/31/2009 12:04:00 PM

dark--but wonderfully done

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/29/2009 8:17:00 AM

this is a nice write jade. welcome to the soup!and keep up the good work!

Chris Yarnell

Date: 3/27/2009 2:27:00 PM

nice jade. chris ps.see you in class

P Sheart

Date: 3/27/2009 1:39:00 PM

Hi Jade So nice to meet you hun! Truly enjoyed. We welcome you here with open hearts. Look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future. Take care Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia

Date: 3/27/2009 12:35:00 PM

Interesting images carry your thoughts in this poem. You may want to change cemetarys to cemetaries. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen