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leaving home tell tales of courage hope and faith my mind will not hold these sliding thoughts tonight. tonight I am afraid it has been growing in my gut all day tying myriad knots like a crazed boy scout. I am afraid with no surcease it is paralyzing me binding me into the woman I do not know. write, write, scribble her out it is my only way of battle, expose the witch. fear is corrosive and scuttles through my night an alien awaiting me tomorrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/21/2017 5:55:00 AM
Be strong my love! Life can be a real challenge at tells but YOU ARE STRONG! I am with you... I need you! Love, Jack xxx
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Date: 9/20/2017 2:42:00 PM
I understand you Patricia. Write as much as you like. Find your own way of dealing with your life We will read :)
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Date: 9/20/2017 1:49:00 PM
Is this about moving on? It must be scary and the fear is infectious. Albeit my situation is different in that I felt stuck here, the fear was there. So now I learnt the value of meditation and it changed everything. I hope youre allright.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/20/2017 5:38:00 PM
I am fine now Jannie, the poem is about a growing fear I have been battling regarding leaving my house for appointments act. I am to all intents and purposes a recluse.
Date: 9/20/2017 9:18:00 AM
uhm ... tomorrow is a miracle ... never woke up there ... here ... take this mind fist and calm yourself ... ha ha ... no really take it ... we love your goods ... the mind fist is for that witch ... ha ha ... no. really ... let's walk this off ... by the time we make it to Alaska you will be dripping with the wind blowing chills ... don't worry ... this is gonna be great ...
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Date: 9/21/2017 7:46:00 AM
here ... take these boots ... composite toed ... get greedy ...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/20/2017 5:41:00 PM
Hi icy man thank you. The witch will melt as in Oz. You will help fight her. Thank you
Date: 9/20/2017 4:16:00 AM
powerful feelings, very powerfully described. Last verse - goose bumps !
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/20/2017 7:24:00 AM
Sorry desperate times.
Date: 9/20/2017 1:33:00 AM
The impact is really felt with that last stanza in this great piece! Nicely done
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/20/2017 5:47:00 PM
I have wanted to get closer and closer to the marrow of heart. This is real it was happening as I wrote and I did not demure. Bare facts mam.

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