Last Words To You

Your a Dirty mess
broke, toking on your death smoke
Drowning in a pool of lies 
until your gonna start to choke
Does your mummy even know
That you ever did smoke
Before you blame your sh i t on me
Driving drunk,taking coke

You have lied and you cheated,
yet apparently it’s my fault
That we ended, I’m controlling
When I didn’t check your phone
I knew I should
You were texting and arranging when to go
Get your things, come to my place
No one ever has to know
Keep it in, brush your teeth
Never let that s h it go
I’m going mad, you a prick
They f u ck ing said so
Moved on, no more love 
I just wanted you to know
I was loyal, full of hope
But you let our love blow
Up in pieces, with no reason
It really bothers me
How you thinking you’ll get away with disrespecting me,
Here’s a thing, shut it up
As I know we don’t belong 
Your the one who never loved me
Your the one who did me wrong

By Rosie Hill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/8/2019 12:54:00 PM
Rosie, re your reply to my comment: I have poetry that, as you say, is an outlet for anger or whatever. I do think poetry, helps keep me sane and focused. It's a blessing, I think. Poetry is a snapshot of where we are in time. It's great, Best to you! Panagiota
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Rosie Hill
Date: 2/8/2019 12:57:00 PM
Why Thankyou very much, thanks for all this support x
Date: 2/6/2019 1:47:00 PM
Rosie..such pain and rage in this lpoem and rightly so and well written. Many creeps on this earth, but good ones too. Sometimes things don't go our way. Soul pain is the worst. I have been down that road... Be happy, you are worth it Panagiota
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Date: 2/6/2019 7:23:00 PM
I truly wrote this poem out of anger, I read back and sympathise with myself. I’m able to move from the anger now but this poem was my outlet of any bad feeling towards my previous relationship x
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