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Last Words To You

Your a Dirty mess broke, toking on your death smoke Drowning in a pool of lies until your gonna start to choke Does your mummy even know That you ever did smoke Before you blame your sh i t on me Driving drunk,taking coke You have lied and you cheated, yet apparently it’s my fault That we ended, I’m controlling When I didn’t check your phone I knew I should You were texting and arranging when to go Get your things, come to my place No one ever has to know Keep it in, brush your teeth Never let that s h it go I’m going mad, you a prick They f u ck ing said so Moved on, no more love I just wanted you to know I was loyal, full of hope But you let our love blow Up in pieces, with no reason It really bothers me How you thinking you’ll get away with disrespecting me, Here’s a thing, shut it up As I know we don’t belong Your the one who never loved me Your the one who did me wrong By Rosie Hill

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Date: 2/8/2019 12:54:00 PM
Rosie, re your reply to my comment: I have poetry that, as you say, is an outlet for anger or whatever. I do think poetry, helps keep me sane and focused. It's a blessing, I think. Poetry is a snapshot of where we are in time. It's great, Best to you! Panagiota
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Rosie Hill
Date: 2/8/2019 12:57:00 PM
Why Thankyou very much, thanks for all this support x
Date: 2/6/2019 1:47:00 PM
Rosie..such pain and rage in this lpoem and rightly so and well written. Many creeps on this earth, but good ones too. Sometimes things don't go our way. Soul pain is the worst. I have been down that road... Be happy, you are worth it Panagiota
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Date: 2/6/2019 7:23:00 PM
I truly wrote this poem out of anger, I read back and sympathise with myself. I’m able to move from the anger now but this poem was my outlet of any bad feeling towards my previous relationship x

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