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I know where I'm at; And not where I'm goin; So on the basis of that; I wanted you knowin. For always I will; Remember the light; And the heavenly view; You; Who greeted my sight. How quickly you came; And brightened my day; How quickly the same; You faded away. I will forget come never; Or at least for a while; Our quite brief little endeavor; That held a permanent smile... :-( Your reasons are yours; And you have them I'm sure; Though misunderstanding the cause; I can not pretend; That I haven't seen this before, Yes I know its the end......

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Date: 2/2/2024 4:42:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:05:00 PM
ryan, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:51:00 PM
Ryan, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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