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Lamentations

Calm of night, spoiled by cries, Screams aloud, woke me up. Death didn’t wait, came all the way, Knocked our doors, took them away. As sarin spread all around, Helpless souls gasped for air. Could see those eyes, plead for help, Turned my face, can’t see them die. As I clung to my little one, Saw him breathe his last on my lap. Wish I died that fateful day, Wish I was born in hell than here. Author : Abie Date : 13 October 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2013 10:20:00 AM

ABIE, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

Skat A

Date: 10/27/2013 1:25:00 AM

ABIE< CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

Abie Jayan
Date: 10/27/2013 1:28:00 AM

Thanks SKAT :)

Jose Rodriguez

Date: 10/22/2013 5:46:00 PM

Deeply powerful. A great poem that stirs the readers emotions. Ill be sure to check out some of your other pieces as well:-)

Abie Jayan
Date: 10/23/2013 1:28:00 AM

Thanks buddy.... :)

Skat A

Date: 10/13/2013 7:49:00 PM

Abie. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Abie Jayan
Date: 10/17/2013 2:23:00 AM

Hi SKAT, Thank you buddy..your comments... :-) This is an awesome place..Happy to meet poets like you and to learn from you..:) Am software engineer by profession.working in Dubai...calm and cool person who loves nature..and would like to travel a lot... BTW...if you don't mind,could please intro yourself :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/13/2013 7:23:00 AM

Abie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Abie Jayan
Date: 10/17/2013 2:37:00 AM

Hi Linda, Thanks buddy....:) happy to meet nice poets like you... :) you too take care...keep in touch...:) Abie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/13/2013 4:08:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup,Abie ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Abie Jayan
Date: 10/17/2013 2:38:00 AM

Hi Anne, Thanks buddy...for comments....hope to learn a lot from people here.. :) take care dear.. :) Abie