Lake

Haiku The rain lake That will disappear in May Is silvery today The rain lake Looks golden today Gone in May The rain lake Has droplets of dreams Never fades in May.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 10:31:00 AM

Jan, oooo,, this is sooooo awesome.. I like what you did. The imagery's runs smooth... Love Linda

David Meade

Date: 1/6/2015 8:36:00 AM

Wonderful -- may your dreams and your words never fade . . . lovely Jan. 7

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 1/7/2015 9:17:00 AM

thank you Dave

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/6/2015 5:28:00 AM

Very nice pen Jan! I enjoyed reading your poem.Thank you for sharing dear friend. A 7 from me! Wish you a happy new year 2015! Have a very lovely day :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 1/7/2015 9:18:00 AM

thank you Dorian