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La La La - Nursery Rhyme

La la la, tink tink tink! Well now, what do you think, Of my pretty li'l song? I sing it all day long. La la la, tink tink tink! Well now, what do you think?, Tap a piano key And sing along with me. La la la, tink tink tink! Well now, what do you think, When you play each li'l note And sing the song I wrote? La la la, tink tink tink! Well now, what do you think?, A song for me and you. Music was meant for two. La la la, tink tink tink! Well now, what do you think, About our happy tune We sing all afternoon? (March 29th, 2023)

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 10/16/2023 7:36:00 PM

Teachers of young children would just LOVE this. I know I would have when I was a kindergarten teacher. I can't read it without singing and tapping my feet to it's little beat. Fun, fun, fun! Definitely worthy of a win. I wish to write like you someday. :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/28/2023 4:30:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem, Marikate, and your kind comments on it ... I appreciate them so much :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2023 2:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Nursery Rhyme contest, Kelly - hugs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/17/2023 10:15:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, for your kind congrats... Sending warm hugs to you :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/7/2023 9:35:00 PM

Still loving this sweet, delightful and beautiful nursery rhyme poem/song my dear poet friend Kelly. Coming back to congratulate you on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing. May God bless you and your loved ones this Holy Week and always. Hugs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/15/2023 7:38:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by once again, Len, and for the kind congrats... Sending warm hugs to you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2023 5:14:00 PM

Kelly, congratulations on your win on your poem, “La La La". Many blessings to you. Hugs Eve

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/15/2023 7:36:00 AM

Thank you, Eve... Sending warm hugs to you :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/6/2023 11:02:00 AM

A fun Nursery Rhyme write. Have a great/fun day.................

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/14/2023 6:52:00 AM

Thanks for reading, Paula :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/4/2023 1:00:00 AM

This is so cute and delightful nursery rhyme to sing my dear poet friend Kelly. A great one to really put into a melody. I love it. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest although it's already a winner in my book. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/14/2023 6:51:00 AM

Thank you, Len, for your kind comments... They are so encouraging and uplifting for me, always :)