Knees on a Rusted Bench
When the tires went flat
and the sparkle disappeared,
you were there, hands bare—
no gifts, no vows,
just the heaviness of truth:
a breath, a look,
the gentle heat of mutual loss.
The crowd flowed like a river,
their gaze on grander ships.
But you remained,
knees brushing against mine on a weathered bench,
giggling at the clouds
as if the rain was of no concern.
Copyright © Ramon Riveraalmena | Year Posted 2024
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