Kite Fying

with rhythmic balance perfect kite flies up in sky thread reeling controls even in air's speed imbalanced plays no no dance back with nose diving

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Skat A

Date: 5/10/2015 11:24:00 AM

BL, enjoyed the haiku. Hugs *SKAT*

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/11/2015 2:12:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. loved always,bl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2015 6:12:00 AM

Ah! I love the humor here as I lost many kites to those "nose dives" when I was younger. The "no no dance" made me laugh out loud! You have quite a talent for saying a lot in just a few lines, BL. Love and blessings to you, Carolyn

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/5/2015 10:26:00 AM

Many thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful praising comment and credit. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2015 9:23:00 AM

- Bl, love this :) - Well done! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/30/2015 11:45:00 AM

Thanks for loving my poem and for 7 my lovely lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Robert Heemstra

Date: 4/29/2015 9:01:00 PM

The fun of kite flying are memories to cherish.

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/30/2015 11:43:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your visit and comment. Yes, i have recollected my childhood memory and cherishing the same. Loved always,bl