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Kiss Risk

Your lips are so soft tonight like young truth on the fingertips of my fantasies, I know it's dangerous for you it's dangerous for me too, our hearts could become hostages to ancient laws of Love, the leather of the law may be applied silk used to silence shyness, we could appeal to the supreme feeling, I slip the satin secrets off your innocent shoulders texture of carnal cream cascading freely to the flowering of your violet felicity your hair feels like a feather teasing my ear as I listen to the vocals of an inner yearn reveal the rapture of a rose on fire - J.A.B. 2020

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/8/2020 2:50:00 PM

WoW!Justin, This is so romantic! I found it passionate and sensual as well. You have a way with words and you use them well. Your talented pen described what was happening between the characters so perfectly. Excellent job. Have a wonderful day. Thanks for stopping visiting me today:-)Alexis

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/1/2021 12:08:00 AM

Alexis, you're beautiful...I love the poetry that is You, the poetry of your pretty optimism...Happy New Year! ...Justin

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/19/2020 4:18:00 PM

"we could appeal to the supreme feeling" - that's right - love is a supreme state of being. I adore that fiery image you provoke and tempt even for the reader they can feel the heat - the ingenuity. Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/20/2020 4:16:00 PM

To feel the fire of the rose is to see the diamond light of love Poetess...Justin

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/3/2020 1:25:00 PM

"I know it's dangerous for you it's dangerous for me too," WoW. If that's not a red hot sign of what lies in store! Loved the wordplay of "leather of the law" "silk used to silence shyness" and the imagery that one can feel like "violet felicity". You have many tools in your poetry toolbox, that always makes for a rich reading experience.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/20/2020 4:18:00 PM

Smooth touches of tenderness make poetry of the soul's body Poet...J.A.B.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/17/2020 1:44:00 PM

Yes, the magic of a passionate moment. Leaves you breathless and in complete bliss. This is so beautifully written and expressed. Such vivid images you paint with your words. "your hair feels like a feather teasing my ear" Oh my!! Let your imagination overflow. :) Brandy

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/18/2020 8:33:00 PM

It's all love Brandy...J.A.B.