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King Energy

His walk is tall but he is not Except for the space that is his heart He has confidence courage and charisma She’s in a hurry to get what it is he gives her Little things that mean so much Big king energy in heated touch Embraces that chase self doubt away A soldier of love who makes her day

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/19/2025 11:45:00 AM

Since I returned to Soup in January, I have seen your precious smile here, there and everywhere. I wished to visit you at some point in time. I read several of your poems before writing this and it is obvious that you were born with natural talent. You have an ability to deliver impact with brevity that dazzles, I LOVE brevity lines that do that. I'm going to comment on others I read and visit you more often, k? CayCay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/19/2025 6:52:00 PM

Many peps blow off LONG writes as a laborious commitment-effort, (even famous poems), so don't linger there. Many people can't do brevity as you deliver. As for Free Verse, I sense you are on the young side of your poetry journey so, believe me, as you grow and hone your pen, free verse skills may be a natural spin-off. Focus on the strong skills you were blessed with that, in turn, you bless the world.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/19/2025 2:33:00 PM

I feel seen and heard that you would read my poems CayCay! I must admit that I am challenged to write longer poems that are free style I just don’t do it as well. The rare exception is my Dragon Stew for kids and another for kids, Nana Papa Pony & Me. lol I appreciate your interest and shall stop by your poetry pages as well!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/18/2025 8:48:00 PM

I like that, 'a soldier in love!'

Karen Jones
Date: 3/19/2025 2:29:00 PM

Thank you! :0)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/18/2025 10:57:00 AM

Karen hi, i haven't commentated on your lovely poems for ages, I hope you are well my friend, however short King energy is, he remains 'A soldier of love who makes her day.' Very cute poem. Blessings, hugs, Jennifer.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/18/2025 11:38:00 AM

Jennifer thanks for stopping by and glad you like it!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/18/2025 7:42:00 AM

Being short, I really appreciate this poem. Short people don't get noticed much. I enjoy reading this.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/18/2025 8:51:00 AM

I’m short too! I agree! Short people like Prince Roger’s Nelson are larger than life despite being 5ft 1!

Silent One

Date: 3/18/2025 7:34:00 AM

A soldier of love who makes her day... thats really sweet Karen..

Karen Jones
Date: 3/18/2025 8:50:00 AM

Thanks :0)