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Just Playing Around....

Ohh ooh i've stepped in doggie pooh what to do my new shoes now full of gunky goo these streets pile of treats smelly feet these piles I meet quite a feat falling heaps leaps and peeps i'm missing sleep suppose i'm bored can't ignore all the crap around the floor what's in store asking for more as I'm walking toward the door just a mess getting less must arrest this clown in jest ....okay.... I'm through playing around,playing with sound,coming unwound....

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Date: 8/22/2008 1:06:00 PM
Wow! A remarkable rhythmic poem - a great write -very impressive. May I thank you also for your philisophic comments on my poem Your Portrait.
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Date: 8/22/2008 11:44:00 AM
Thanks for allowing me to chuckle with this one. What a day brightener. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/22/2008 9:51:00 AM
Jay this is something that plagues us all and your way of expressing it is priceless - I was glad to hear from you on my blog for it had been awhile and I was starting to fear I had somehow did somthing to hurt our friendship which I would never wish to do - I do treasure your gifts to my life - God Bless
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Date: 8/22/2008 8:14:00 AM
there is always going to be some poo....just have to be careful how you walk and how hard you step..lol
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Date: 8/21/2008 2:08:00 PM
And just exactly was that you had for lunch today young man??? Was there any food with what you drank? LOL! Just teasing. Most likely the influence of those adorable kidlets. Silly Jay. Made me smile. Love, Shar
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