Just Imagine

Just imagine in the deepest night the moon she is a goddess silver hair needs star combs

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John Fleming

Date: 10/15/2017 4:03:00 AM

I do not fully understand the exact requirements of the Haiku...but you do write such compelling little three-liners, Patricia. My warmest affections. :) john

John Fleming
Date: 10/15/2017 9:01:00 AM

Hhmmm...food for thought perhaps.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/15/2017 8:24:00 AM

Three lines, 5/7/5 syllables, usually twist ending. You re curious why not just go all to heck with yourself write a few. No one ever has to know if you find it is not your style. Can't wait to read. Thank you John.