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Just Imagination

I thought the more focussed, the much better Thoughts can flow easily like a delicate feather A feather decorated with arrangements of patterns Bursting from the dull dreary colors of the ground to the beautiful pale yellow of Saturn Exploration from Saturn to the deep blues of the mysterious sea Water creatures curious, lively with the current not knowing where they be Wandering with no knowledge about the outside of their world, these species are careless Following the sounds that the fresh waters possess Sweet melodic sound of the rushed waves clashing on shore Bringing the days end in a swift little roar The quiet wait for the tics to toc Everything seems vacant as I slip back to thought Comfortably overlay-ed by the thought of relaxation Time to wind down from that brisk vacation I thought the more focussed, the much better Thoughts can be disrupted easily like a delicate feather - Rebecca C*

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Date: 5/2/2011 10:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Rebecca. I hope you have a week filled with good health, love, and much inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2011 5:18:00 AM
Yes they really can. Mind tricks are usually never welcome. Though, it can be a push to actually turn it into a reality. Nice job!
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