just for laughs, again: senryus

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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 March 03
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Joseph and Mary had a dear friend named Harry who loved his dairy came baby Jesus then Harry went to pieces oh this is grievous babies drink dairy but not yours trust me Harry Joseph trust Mary came Mastiff Hey'Zeus saw Harry and had figured puss without its boots oh Mary Joseph is Hey'Zeus just visiting he's your new brother strange though drinks dairy oh nice bet you hate won ton well did plan to change

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/3/2024 5:05:00 PM

Dear Hilo Poet, Your senryus are like whispers of humor and humanity intertwined. They evoke laughter while gently nudging us to reflect on life's quirks. Through your words, you craft moments of levity amidst the mundane, reminding us to find joy in the absurdity of existence. Thank you for sharing your wit and insight. Your verses are a delightful journey through the whimsical corners of the human experience. - Blessings, Daniel

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/4/2024 8:03:00 AM

You've an eye for detail, Daniel, and an astute one to bat into the spotlight its starry points of measured value. I am indeed grateful for your wondrous thought out expressions that accentuates the heart. Thank you, my friend. Aloha, and blessings as well, William