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see the birds in circled flight gliding and drifting with the wind this way, that way, way up high together high high touching the azure sky lost inside white puffed up sailing clouds then, just falling fall and falling here they all come sweep up in a whirl soaring in a silent bird ballet twirl do a perfect figure eight around around again who is the leader and who is the follower and like the birds in circled flight at dawn my words fly up into the sky on wings (of love) glide with the wind then, do come back onto my page not quite finished words with you so so impatient you are to fly wild I will try to gather you up anchor you if I must oh, do stay still . . . now- my dears I am done with you time to see you fly gliding and drifting with the wind way up high touch the azure sky (fall and fall) whirl and twirl again again you will figure it out yes, in circled flight spread your wings just fly . . . words. ________________________ May 31, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/just fly words Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1027-408-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Best Free Verse in May 2018 Sponsor, Laura Loo First Place ____________________________ For the contest, Poetry For The Sake of Poetry sponsor, John Lawless Fourth Place

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Date: 7/4/2018 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Such an uplifting nice feeling reading this. :)
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Date: 7/3/2018 6:22:00 AM
oh wow! I love that picture so much! The heights your poem reaches is beyond heaven's gate.beautifully expressed sweet lady :) thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/7/2018 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations, Broken Wings, on your excellent win with your graceful and elegant poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/7/2018 9:57:00 AM
Exquisite, BW. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Date: 6/7/2018 7:45:00 AM
Ah, the winged muse takes flight. I was engrossed in this from the first line, a smooth and enjoyable read. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 6/3/2018 4:42:00 PM
Touch the azure sky and fly fall Bluebird your wings are not broken anymore
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Date: 6/3/2018 6:08:00 AM
Ah, the wonder of your words fly like the spectacle that are those beautiful birds. When I was young millions of Red Winged Black Birds would stretch for miles as far as you could see across the sky. I have seen thousands of vultures swirling like a tornado in the air, flocks of squawking parrots, soaring swallow tailed kites, mating Bald Eagles dancing in the sky in front of me and single pairs of Sand Hill Cranes quietly flying overhead, all of them amazing and mesmerizing.
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Date: 5/31/2018 2:28:00 PM
Sometimes I fly in my dreams. I have not yet done any figure eights :) Many of your poems have a nice, peaceful quality to them. This one is no exception, and the photo is perfect.
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