Just As I Suspected

Come to an End, all these Good Things (Youth and Hope and splendored Springs) But, how can I ask for Fortune's to pass When I've cut my throat, but still wish to sing...?

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/2/2013 6:49:00 PM

Chan This gave me chills. It is very eerie and sad. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Tear Us Apart poem. I know you and your partner will NEVER be apart. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/3/2013 10:07:00 AM

Thanks for the read and review, Sweet Pea! <3

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2013 9:00:00 AM

Very fine expressions,

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/27/2013 9:04:00 AM

Thank you, good Doctor; I appreciate the compliment :)