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Life is a tradeoff. We are walking conglomerations of all we invent. Operated, mechanically, electrically,hydraulically. Each, slowly deteriorating. To operate the systems, we are like any power source. There must be a fuel input,and waste output.

To experience, The sensual delight, of eating. We must endure, The exigency, Of excreting.

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Date: 10/11/2016 7:51:00 PM
I love how your note contributes to the poem below. This is such a wonderful thought. Well scripted :) Love, Juli-Michelle
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